Tuesday, November 15, 2005

Do-It-All. Or XXX.

She floats, she floats.
She looks up, up, up, up above.

Sees things, from the corner of her eye, she does.
Knows things, deep inside her.

And still, suffers from infernal stupidity.

Breathes a deep breath. Lets it out in
A pretty puff. Powdery, clean and
Unreal, like the snow always
Seemed in travel ads
In some vague
Magazine.
Snow.
Clean and
Perhaps a little
Clinical, like the smell
Of some sterilised needle that
Would pump the system with most
Wonderful of all things, with her dreams.

Floats, she does.
Looks up, her neck tilts,
She sees it all, from the corner of her eye.
Sees herself, looking up, floating, like in a dream.
Knows it all she does.

Flies in the wind, dances in the shadows, breathes under water.

9 Comments:

Blogger . : A : . said...

I'm back! And I love the new refreshing yellow look!

And of course the visual aspect of the middle stanza.

07:44  
Blogger G Shrivastava said...

A lil wee bit creepy...don't ask why, but creepy.

09:30  
Blogger bluegreenflysplat said...

A ji! Kaise hain aap? Thak-vak to nahi gaye travelling mein? Aiye baithiye.. Kya piyenge - chai, kofee ya kush ishtrang??? Hum ko bahut khusi hua ee jaanke ki aap ko hamra colour pasand aay gaya. bahut, bahut dhanyavad aapka!!!

Aur Geetanjali ji, ee ka? creepy laagat hai hamri kavita aapko? Bahut badhiya, ji, bahut badhiya. Bring it on ji, bring it on!!!!

Hee hee hee.

11:04  
Blogger Φ said...

nice work..nice template..

11:56  
Blogger Casablanca said...

Absolutely great formatting!! Wait... now lemme go read the words also ;)

21:45  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

meow!

11:21  
Blogger bluegreenflysplat said...

Thanks, symbol person..

Cas - meanie.

Veed, I love you too.

11:24  
Blogger . : A : . said...

:-)

16:33  
Blogger G Shrivastava said...

A - you mean you understand that? Hmmm...

10:23  

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